Sunday, January 23, 2011

3rd Person

 Today is a day Rafael has to go school. Before go to school, Rafael have to eat breakfast because his mom said so,  ate it. Breakfast was delicious. Now, he is going to school. Just before school bus arrive, he fly away by strong wind. He black out. After he woke up, he was in the Utopia! In Utopia, lions are live happily with deers!Fox's baby is living with sheep's baby!What a peaceful country. he came back to our home by strong wind one more time. He tell to my parents to find Utopia and live, but his parents just ignore what he is talking about. He thinks they are thinking he is crazy.

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  1. No offense....but i noticed that you like to comment on your posts very much......

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